Death~Stream Posted June 9, 2010 Share Posted June 9, 2010 From start to finish I wonder why The cuts look good in this messed up lie The blood that trickles down my arm People all stare at the girl who self-harms:- "The emo" they call me I turn to my name They act out slicing their wrists I hang my head in shame I can't help my feelings Of being alone I hide myself for the day Just longing to go home I sprawl on my bed With my razor in hand And take myself away To a much better land I stare in the mirror And let myself cry Looking forward to the day That I finally die Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
turtle Posted June 9, 2010 Share Posted June 9, 2010 i like it i understand how u feel... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
african_emo_barbie Posted June 9, 2010 Share Posted June 9, 2010 i understand how u feel ! but tht was a great poem ! i can see the emotion in it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death~Stream Posted June 9, 2010 Author Share Posted June 9, 2010 i understand how u feel ! but tht was a great poem ! i can see the emotion in it! lolz thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkVampireGirl Posted June 9, 2010 Share Posted June 9, 2010 Really good, i like it<3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death~Stream Posted June 10, 2010 Author Share Posted June 10, 2010 Really good' date=' i like it<3 [/quote'] thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest xxRisikaxx Posted November 25, 2010 Share Posted November 25, 2010 i've been down that road too many times before. i know what yoiur going threw. beautiful poetry, btw Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXForeverDarknessXx Posted January 18, 2011 Share Posted January 18, 2011 That was really good, probably the best one i've seen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxEmoWolfiexX Posted January 18, 2011 Share Posted January 18, 2011 I know exactly how you feel. It was a great poem. I really liked it and it had a powerful emotion to go with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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