Panty Raid Posted September 20, 2011 Posted September 20, 2011 BLACK BY:LEAH OUR SKIN TOUCH MY MOUTHS DRY YOUR HANDS HOT AROUND MY THROAT OUR EYES MEET YOURS FILL MY FADE “I LOVE YOU…IM SORRY” YOU SAY YOU PRESS YOUR HOT WARM LIPS AGAINST MY PALE COLD LIPS OUR BREATHS MINGLE YOUR HOT WET TEARS DRIP ONTO MY COLD HARD CHEECK “IM SORRY” YOU MUMMUR AGAIN AGAINST MY LIPS AS YOU SQUEEZE TIGHTER OUR EYES DRIFT CLOSE YOU CLUTCH MY NOW USELESS BODY CRIEING & SCREAMING AS MY WORLD TURNS BLACK
Panty Raid Posted October 1, 2011 Author Posted October 1, 2011 Thanx.... Lol im nt even really that good of a write
Capn_Chantal Posted October 1, 2011 Posted October 1, 2011 Are you kidding me? I honestly thought otherwise when I read this. It's really amazing
Panty Raid Posted October 4, 2011 Author Posted October 4, 2011 Thank u very much! No one ever told me that before.... I feel happy....... They jst look at me crazy cuz they are mostly........ all revovles around some kind death ........ so they stopped reading them bcuz........ they said it makes them " depressed"
Capn_Chantal Posted October 4, 2011 Posted October 4, 2011 Who is this "they"? Maybe they are just afraid of your talent and your ability to write such things..idk. But keep posting awesome stuff like this please. I'd say even if your writing makes people depressed,then maybe your doing such a great job that your evoking such a feeling in them. Meaning your writing might be some very powerful stuff
Panty Raid Posted October 5, 2011 Author Posted October 5, 2011 Idk.... Some of the stuff i wrote kinda sucks besides some of my short stories....
Panty Raid Posted October 6, 2011 Author Posted October 6, 2011 iTS AWESOME dude good work i like it Thanks....
inyourskinnies Posted October 6, 2011 Posted October 6, 2011 This is a great poem :3 I write such useless things, like stories about dirt. -.-
Panty Raid Posted October 6, 2011 Author Posted October 6, 2011 This one is actually a new subject for me.... Mine is mostly on *clears throat*...... Um rape.....
Little-Emo-Dino Posted October 7, 2011 Posted October 7, 2011 well mine are usual about my father and death
Panty Raid Posted October 9, 2011 Author Posted October 9, 2011 Oh... Thats cool...i nver wrote one on my dad cuz i hate hos guts. I dnt want to waste good words on him
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