Emochik4life Posted January 11, 2013 Share Posted January 11, 2013 Shes Slit Her Throat In Love With You She Always Asks Herself What To Do Everyone Asks Her Umm Are You Okay She Answers No I Wanna Die Someday She Feels So Isolated From Ppl In Her Life She Loves Having One Thing With Her,Her Knife No One Understands Her In This Unstable State She Always Thinks Being Here Is Just A Mistake Seriously How Much More Damage Can She Make "Your So Emo Youll Never Find A Love So True" Buh She Did Shes Emo Cuz She <3 You Buh The Saddest Thing Is She Doesnt Wanna Hurt You So She Hurts Herself Cuz Shes So Fucked She Tells Herself Everyday Youre The One Shes Stuck On She Doesnt Wanna Kill You, Buh Its Oh So Sad Cuz She Wants You Here With Her, You Dk How Bad She Only And Forever Wants Just You And Lets Just Say Shes Emo Cuz She <3 You Let Meh Know If You Guys Like This Poem So Far Its My Favorite Thanks(= 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WasteOfMind Posted January 12, 2013 Share Posted January 12, 2013 Ma'am, the poem and lyric forum is that way. ------> As for your poem, quite decent, but I dont really understand why she cuts herself when she loves someone. Makes no sense when you think about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hi-c Posted January 13, 2013 Share Posted January 13, 2013 Ma'am, the poem and lyric forum is that way. ------> As for your poem, quite decent, but I dont really understand why she cuts herself when she loves someone. Makes no sense when you think about it. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emochik4life Posted January 17, 2013 Author Share Posted January 17, 2013 lol Matt Hush Grr lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emochik4life Posted January 17, 2013 Author Share Posted January 17, 2013 Ma'am, the poem and lyric forum is that way. ------> As for your poem, quite decent, but I dont really understand why she cuts herself when she loves someone. Makes no sense when you think about it. Because That Someone She Loves Isnt There With Her So Shes All Depressed And Stuff So Since Shes In So Much Pain She Cuts Cuz Hes Not There With Her To Give Her Love Too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WasteOfMind Posted January 17, 2013 Share Posted January 17, 2013 Because That Someone She Loves Isnt There With Her So Shes All Depressed And Stuff So Since Shes In So Much Pain She Cuts Cuz Hes Not There With Her To Give Her Love Too Does the dude love her back? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheesus ٩(͡๏̮͡๏)۶ Posted January 17, 2013 Share Posted January 17, 2013 i like the poem its really good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nat Posted January 17, 2013 Share Posted January 17, 2013 it's alright. not to be a b***h or anything, but you should try writing out words right.... it makes it better(: &if you take out the "seriously" on the 9th line I think it would sound better c; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest xXDannyAutobotSoldierXx Posted January 19, 2013 Share Posted January 19, 2013 Thanks Guys For Commenting On My Babys Poem And Yes It Could Have Some Fixing Buh I Love It Anyway Cuz Its About Us Being Far Away And Were Emo Cuz We Love Each Other So Much Buh Cant See Each Other So Yeah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darknessPrincess<3 Posted January 20, 2013 Share Posted January 20, 2013 it's alright. not to be a b***h or anything, but you should try writing out words right.... it makes it better(: &if you take out the "seriously" on the 9th line I think it would sound better c; ^ i was thinking about that too...but overall its good... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hi-c Posted January 20, 2013 Share Posted January 20, 2013 *thinking(am i still hushed?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emochik4life Posted January 23, 2013 Author Share Posted January 23, 2013 *thinking(am i still hushed?) No You Can Talk Now Haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emochik4life Posted January 23, 2013 Author Share Posted January 23, 2013 i like the poem its really good Thank You Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Dark. Posted January 27, 2013 Share Posted January 27, 2013 poems decent but I'm not really a rhyming kinda chick the rhyming poems I always read the focus is more on trying to find a word to rhyme with them making it any scence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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