Emo Cuz She <3 You

[Emochik4life]

Shes Slit Her Throat In Love With You

She Always Asks Herself What To Do

Everyone Asks Her Umm Are You Okay

She Answers No I Wanna Die Someday

She Feels So Isolated From Ppl In Her Life

She Loves Having One Thing With Her,Her Knife

No One Understands Her In This Unstable State

She Always Thinks Being Here Is Just A Mistake

Seriously How Much More Damage Can She Make

"Your So Emo Youll Never Find A Love So True"

Buh She Did Shes Emo Cuz She <3 You

Buh The Saddest Thing Is She Doesnt Wanna Hurt You

So She Hurts Herself Cuz Shes So Fucked

She Tells Herself Everyday Youre The One Shes Stuck On

She Doesnt Wanna Kill You, Buh Its Oh So Sad

Cuz She Wants You Here With Her, You Dk How Bad

She Only And Forever Wants Just You

And Lets Just Say Shes Emo Cuz She <3 You

 

 

 

Let Meh Know If You Guys Like This Poem So Far Its My Favorite Thanks(=

 

 

 

[WasteOfMind]

Ma'am, the poem and lyric forum is that way. ------>

 

As for your poem, quite decent, but I dont really understand why she cuts herself when she loves someone.

Makes no sense when you think about it.

[hi-c]

Ma'am, the poem and lyric forum is that way. ------>

 

As for your poem, quite decent, but I dont really understand why she cuts herself when she loves someone.

Makes no sense when you think about it.

lol

[Emochik4life]

lol

Matt Hush Grr lol

[Emochik4life]

Ma'am, the poem and lyric forum is that way. ------>

 

As for your poem, quite decent, but I dont really understand why she cuts herself when she loves someone.

Makes no sense when you think about it.

Because That Someone She Loves Isnt There With Her So Shes All Depressed And Stuff So Since Shes In So Much Pain She Cuts Cuz Hes Not There With Her To Give Her Love Too

[WasteOfMind]

Because That Someone She Loves Isnt There With Her So Shes All Depressed And Stuff So Since Shes In So Much Pain She Cuts Cuz Hes Not There With Her To Give Her Love Too

 Does the dude love her back?

[Cheesus ٩(͡๏̮͡๏)۶]

i like the poem its really good

[nat]

it's alright. not to be a b***h or anything, but you should try writing out words right.... it makes it better(: &if you take out the "seriously" on the 9th line I think it would sound better c;

[Guest xXDannyAutobotSoldierXx]

Thanks Guys For Commenting On My Babys Poem And Yes It Could Have Some Fixing Buh I Love It Anyway Cuz Its About Us Being Far Away And Were Emo Cuz We Love Each Other So Much Buh Cant See Each Other So Yeah

[darknessPrincess<3]

it's alright. not to be a b***h or anything, but you should try writing out words right.... it makes it better(: &if you take out the "seriously" on the 9th line I think it would sound better c;

 

^ i was thinking about that too...but overall its good...

[hi-c]

*thinking(am i still hushed?)

[Emochik4life]

*thinking(am i still hushed?)

No You Can Talk Now Haha

[Emochik4life]

i like the poem its really good

Thank You

[.Dark.]

poems decent but I'm not really a rhyming kinda chick the rhyming poems I always read the focus is more on trying to find a word to rhyme with them making it any scence