Beautiful Scars

[Jaxxdarkstarz]

If you enjoy this I'll slowly be uploading more of my thoughts to "TheLittle Book I Always Carry Around." on   http://www.wattpad.com/user/Jaxxdarkstarz

~ Here's a little poem/song-thingy I wrote a few months ago. Tell me what you think please! Hugs!~     

 

All the beautiful scars, 

All the beautifl scars tracing your face, 

A gaslow smile, a wicked grin, 

And a wink that shows all of your deadliest sins.   

Hollow eyes and shreicking crys, 

Monotone velvet replys, 

With poision laced lies.

  Roses thrown on the floor,

Shreded and wilting,

All behind closed doors,

Wounded and fighting.  

All the beautiful scars, 

All the beautifl scars tracing your face, 

A gaslow smile, a wicked grin, 

And a wink that shows all of your deadliest sins.   

All the beautiful scars,

Forever imprinted on your skin, 

Gouged and gashed, 

Ripped and red, 

Jagged tears into rough cracked skin.

[Rockerchick22]

What made you write this? Its good

[--Mgiez--]

I read it twice n sang it

It's really good your good with words

[Jaxxdarkstarz]

What made you write this? Its good

Umm. I was just thinking about scars,pain, abnormalities..stuff like that, and it just ended up on the page. Thanks  

 

I read it twice n sang it

It's really good your good with words

Thanks  

[LeeLee]

This is really good. Beautiful flow and description. Keep it up.

[Jaxxdarkstarz]

This is really good. Beautiful flow and description. Keep it up.

Thank you ^-^