Jaxxdarkstarz Posted March 14, 2013 Share Posted March 14, 2013 If you enjoy this I'll slowly be uploading more of my thoughts to "TheLittle Book I Always Carry Around." on http://www.wattpad.com/user/Jaxxdarkstarz ~ Here's a little poem/song-thingy I wrote a few months ago. Tell me what you think please! Hugs!~ All the beautiful scars, All the beautifl scars tracing your face, A gaslow smile, a wicked grin, And a wink that shows all of your deadliest sins. Hollow eyes and shreicking crys, Monotone velvet replys, With poision laced lies. Roses thrown on the floor, Shreded and wilting, All behind closed doors, Wounded and fighting. All the beautiful scars, All the beautifl scars tracing your face, A gaslow smile, a wicked grin, And a wink that shows all of your deadliest sins. All the beautiful scars, Forever imprinted on your skin, Gouged and gashed, Ripped and red, Jagged tears into rough cracked skin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockerchick22 Posted April 1, 2013 Share Posted April 1, 2013 What made you write this? Its good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--Mgiez-- Posted April 1, 2013 Share Posted April 1, 2013 I read it twice n sang it It's really good your good with words Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaxxdarkstarz Posted June 1, 2013 Author Share Posted June 1, 2013 What made you write this? Its good Umm. I was just thinking about scars,pain, abnormalities..stuff like that, and it just ended up on the page. Thanks I read it twice n sang it It's really good your good with words Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeeLee Posted June 7, 2013 Share Posted June 7, 2013 This is really good. Beautiful flow and description. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaxxdarkstarz Posted June 7, 2013 Author Share Posted June 7, 2013 This is really good. Beautiful flow and description. Keep it up. Thank you ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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