Nevar Posted May 11, 2013 Share Posted May 11, 2013 Sometimes it all just gets to be too much, And then i want to take the gun... Put the barrel to my head.. And pull the trigger, So ill be dead. I can end my pain once and for all, No more suffering that i hid so well, no one knew.. no one saw.. The pain i hid behind my wall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
punk301 Posted May 11, 2013 Share Posted May 11, 2013 flow was neatly done, slight grammar mistakes but nothing too serious. good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nevar Posted May 12, 2013 Author Share Posted May 12, 2013 thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
purplesuicide102 Posted May 12, 2013 Share Posted May 12, 2013 beautiful truly beautiful this poem speaks to me and describes my life Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nevar Posted May 13, 2013 Author Share Posted May 13, 2013 Thank you ") ... Im sorry for whatever happened. Its sad that people push us as far as too feel like this. Hold your head high(: even though i dont know you i care about you and am here for you!! X) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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