No more suffering, no more pain

[Nevar]

Sometimes it all just gets to be too much,

And then i want to take the gun...

Put the barrel to my head..

And pull the trigger,

So ill be dead.

 

I can end my pain once and for all,

No more suffering that i hid so well,

no one knew..

no one saw..

The pain i hid behind my wall.

[punk301]

flow was neatly done, slight grammar mistakes but nothing too serious. good job.

[Nevar]

thank you

[purplesuicide102]

beautiful truly beautiful this poem speaks to me and describes my life

[Nevar]

Thank you ") ... Im sorry for whatever happened. Its sad that people push us as far as too feel like this. Hold your head high(: even though i dont know you i care about you and am here for you!! X)