Confusion .-.

[Nevar]

I lie here wondering where i belong..

Whats the reason for my breathing?

My heart beating?

Whats the point if im already gone..

Im drowning in all these emotions,

I cant even tell them apart..

Im not sure how to explain my feelings...

Where do i even start?

Maybe the the confusion im feeling,

The pain that runs through my veins,

the anger burning inside me,

Or the sorrow in my soul?

Im drowning in all these emotions,

I cant even tell them apart..

Im not sure how to explain my feelings...

Where do i even start?.

[punk301]

I loved the flow you've accomplished here. As I said try to clean up grammar mistakes like using i instead of I. It lets off a slight hint of laziness in one's writing ability. Other than that it was a fine crafted piece of literature. 

[Jaxxdarkstarz]

Its good. I've felt like that a lot before..

[Nevar]

Its good. I've felt like that a lot before..

Thanks. and yea it sucks :/

[Nevar]

I loved the flow you've accomplished here. As I said try to clean up grammar mistakes like using i instead of I. It lets off a slight hint of laziness in one's writing ability. Other than that it was a fine crafted piece of literature. 

Thanks... and yeah it could probably use some better grammer but i wasnt trying to make it perfect. I just write poems on how i feel and they are just to get the point across to people. But if i ever write a poem and try to get it in some kind of contest or write a book or something ill take that to mind.(: .. but thank you

[punk301]

But off course.

[Jaxxdarkstarz]

Welcome. And yeah it does..