BipolarBear Posted May 11, 2013 Share Posted May 11, 2013 how can i take away your painkeep you from going insanehow can i disperse the cloud that lingersif only i could with the touch of my fingersi's wash away the past and the darkness you feeli'd change this and your heart i'd stealone treasure that is worth more than gold or gloryor something that is the most holy but how can i wish that all awayjust so you will learn to love.. and stay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DerdriueBurden Posted May 11, 2013 Share Posted May 11, 2013 This is beautiful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
punk301 Posted May 11, 2013 Share Posted May 11, 2013 the flow was flawed, aside from grammar mistakes. Still its a decent poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nevar Posted May 19, 2013 Share Posted May 19, 2013 Beautiful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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