How

[BipolarBear]

how can i take away your pain
keep you from going insane
how can i disperse the cloud that lingers
if only i could with the touch of my fingers
i's wash away the past and the darkness you feel
i'd change this and your heart i'd steal
one treasure that is worth more than gold or glory
or something that is the most holy

but how can i wish that all away
just so you will learn to love.. and stay

[DerdriueBurden]

This is beautiful

[punk301]

the flow was flawed, aside from grammar mistakes. Still its a decent poem.

[Nevar]

Beautiful