Stolen

[❧Ắṅṅα Aṃṇεṡiα☢]

We watch the season pull up its own stage

And catch the last weekend of the last week

Before the gold and the glimmer have been replaced

Another sun soaked season fades away
 

You have stolen my heart

You have stolen my heart
Invitation only grant farewells

Crash the best one of the best ones

Clear liquor and cloudy eyed

Too early to say goodnight
 

You have stolen my heart

You have stolen my heart
And from the ballroom floor, we are in celebration

One good stretch before our hibernation

Our dreams assured and we all will sleep well

Sleep well, sleep well, sleep well, sleep well
You have stolen, you have stolen

You have stolen my heart
I watch you spin around in your highest heels

You are the best one of the best ones

And we all look like we feel
You have stolen my, you have stolen myYou have stolen my heart


 

Edited May 11, 2013 by Rawr c:

[punk301]

One error at the end but easily overlooked by your word choice and imagery. The only thing I would have done differently is when you repeat a line and try to make it stand out; you should try and give it a separate stanza. 

 

For example:

I have nobody here now,

I am lost,

darkness creeps along the cowl,

I am forever chilled by winters frost,

 

Lonely Eternal,

Lonely Eternal,

 

Heavens pray be...END

 

Your the writer though, so if you don't wish to this, it's your choice.