Carpe-Noctum Posted July 15, 2013 Share Posted July 15, 2013 Let Me Know What You Think (First Time I've Ever Tried Poetry) I'm Feeling Alone I Feel Like I Have Nowhere To Go I Need Help From Above I Need To Be Surrounded By Love I Just Can't Take It Anymore I Need Someone To Help Me Win This War No More Heart, No More Soul No One To Repair This Heart Shaped Hole I Need A Friend That Will Stay Here Til The End But I Don't Believe In Happyness It's Hasn't Done Anything For Me All I Feel Is Pain Like Its A Never Ending Rain I Have Nothing To Lose I Love My Family But Even Around Them I Feel Blue Can Someone Help Me Can Someone Revive Me Probably Not All They See Is My Body In A Box Put Me Six Feet Under And Let My Voice Echo Like Thunder If You Hear My Words Remember Them Cuz When Im Gone Their Meening Will Start To Fade Pile By Pile, They Fill The Hole With Dirt In A Spade Put Me To Rest This Is My Final Test Send Me Away I'll See You Again Someday I Love My God And Jesus Has My Heart Now From This World Do I Part I May Be Gone But Im No Longer Alone In Heaven Have I Found My Home I'm Watching My Family From Above So I Wrote This In Memory Of......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xthekidsfromyesterdayx Posted August 23, 2013 Share Posted August 23, 2013 I like it. I really hope poetry can become a good coping method for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PurpleKitty Posted August 25, 2013 Share Posted August 25, 2013 Its really good! I like it, you should try writing more often ^.^ I find it helps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hi-c Posted September 2, 2013 Share Posted September 2, 2013 i don't really believe in god...but it's still great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the darkangle Posted September 2, 2013 Share Posted September 2, 2013 It's really good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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