Jem Posted August 1, 2013 Share Posted August 1, 2013 One of my well known poems; Sweet little smileInnocent eyesNaive lifeHer reflexion, the reality?A permanant frownDead, Glassy, eyesLost all hope, no way outShe dreams to beThe person she once wasShe dreams to laughAnd wave all her problems offBut the weight on her shouldersIs dragging her downShe tries to screamIt doesnt make a sound. Thanks to any who read it c: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxKinleyxx Posted August 1, 2013 Share Posted August 1, 2013 It's really good. I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rawr I love you Posted August 1, 2013 Share Posted August 1, 2013 i really like this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jem Posted August 1, 2013 Author Share Posted August 1, 2013 Thanks guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rawr I love you Posted August 1, 2013 Share Posted August 1, 2013 no problem Thanks guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hi-c Posted August 1, 2013 Share Posted August 1, 2013 jeeeeemmmmmmm!!!! i think it's fantastic!XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baby Bunny Posted August 1, 2013 Share Posted August 1, 2013 JEM that was amazing !!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jem Posted August 2, 2013 Author Share Posted August 2, 2013 Aha really? Aww thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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