Truth or Lies

[PurpleKitty]

A random poem that I came up with let me know what you think:

 

 

They whisper them to me,

Simple words that cut deep.

Making me believe those simple words,

Whispered to me; voices inside my head.

People are always lying, even if they deny it,

Somehow this brutal honesty is soothing.

Honesty that cuts through my head,

Showing me everyone’s true lying colours.

At least I know, these voices inside my head,

Will forever be with me till the end.

They will support me, as well as torture me,

As they follow me and pull apart people’s words.

Telling me what are lies, ruining people’s disguise,

Saving me from another heart breaking betrayal.

 

 

 

*If you have any advice to make this better please let me know*

[Rawr I love you]

i think it is great the way  it is and i really like this.

[PurpleKitty]

Really? thanks! ^.^ glad you like it