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i sat there forced to watch you in your despair

 

all i could do was watch and stare

 

i couldnt do a thing to save your life

 

i had to watch you in your strife

 

you said you were fine but i know you lied

 

i had to watch you when you died

 

now your gone and i am lost

 

your death had the highest cost

 

now im lost in my despair

 

while others can only watch and stare

 

they cant do a thing to save my life

 

but sit and watch me in my strife

 

i say im fine but they know i lie

 

they must sit and whatch me die.

 

Posted

classed as a senior member I thought you may have a bit of an idea what a poem is :tongue:

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I find it quiet touching, im sorry for your loss

Poems are usually formatted in a more orderly manner. Another thing that did not help, was the fact I did not realize I was in the Poems/Lyrics Forum.

 

Hence, my confusion.

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