BeautifulBelovedOneFromAbo Posted October 21, 2013 Posted October 21, 2013 Love Is A Knife As It Stabs You In The Back. You Put Up A Fight Like Your Under Attack. Loves Leaves You In Excruciating Pain, Thriving For More Then What Has Become. Love Fills You With Nothing But Wanting To Hate. Your In The Position For Wanting Revenge For The Person Who Left You Alive, Not Dead. Love Is Essential To The People Who Desire It. When Love Is Separated And Disconnected, It Leaves A Persons World Fading To Gray. Love Can Hurt People In The Most Painful Ways
Jem Posted October 21, 2013 Posted October 21, 2013 This is cool but I would make more space for each new sentence, its a bit confusing to read otherwise
Baby Bunny Posted October 22, 2013 Posted October 22, 2013 This is really good and I agree with what jemma said ^
Painted_Whore♥~ Posted October 23, 2013 Posted October 23, 2013 I actually really like this. Like Jem said space it out but other than that you are spot on about love and along with I love how you worded this. Bravo c:
BeautifulBelovedOneFromAbo Posted October 23, 2013 Author Posted October 23, 2013 What do you mean make more space? Like Make each new sentence a new line. Like this. Hi I'm samantha I'm a addict Hi Samantha xD What do u mean space it out though?(:
BeautifulBelovedOneFromAbo Posted October 23, 2013 Author Posted October 23, 2013 I get it. Like each new sentence you indent.
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