Crow's blood

[BipolarBear]

why cant whats behind that door
stay there forever more
never to reprise or appear again
secrets, that kill me "friends"
suicide wont help, i'll relive them more...

and when my crow, taps for more
leave a feather at my door
a pile of black, with one white
to disappear every night,
they'll guild an angel, sent for you
make us proud.. in what you do

[Stardust_Genius]

6/10 work. A bit more work and less emoish.