Rose

[Erebus]

You see your life in a moment

Spiral through your mind, your reality shattered

I see your fragments, Blue And Opaque, but I cant see your soul through my eyes

Infinity Beckons, your mind wanders, Soon you will see what this world really means to you.

But the Lies are like the stars, all omnipresent. Jaded in a second, you will truely see past the boundaries, but you wont see yourself coming. I see your scars, your battered will, your silver tears as you slide across the horizon, looking for a way out

But there is only one way out. Ascend as you might, a million miles to go, the exit is infront of you, but yet you fear your sudden freedom. Take a moment, and step through. Welcome to your Life, a true gift to an adventurer as exquisite as you

Just follow the Rule of Rose, for Reality is a prison. Only in your mind you are free. I bid you farewell, and wish you well on your Journey. Goodbye, and live well. Follow the Rule of Rose

Edited March 14, 2014 by Becquerel

[Bella bee]

It's pretty good

[Erebus]

Thanks. Its my first one that I actually bothered to finish.

[daniforyou]

nyce

[Cheesus ٩(͡๏̮͡๏)۶]

I loveddddddddd it o:

[imbackbabycudder]

That was very deep. It's easy to see you spent time making this. Awesome first poem that you completed!