PurpleKitty Posted April 21, 2014 Share Posted April 21, 2014 Slowly, dwindling away in the dark, losing to ones heart. Oh such a dark black soul, trying to take control. How cruel ones fate can be, to tease and tease and tease. Promising the light but giving the dark. Such souls start slowly tearing you apart. They rip you raw, till your sore. Exposing your weakness, exploiting your wishes. Attempting to break you down, bring you to the ground, ground, ground. They fight you hard and long, never allowing time even for your favouite song. Corrupting everything you ever knew, tainting everything you've ever thought. Sucking you down down down, dragging you to the depths of hell. A dark black hole formed in the heart, in which all these dark whisphers start. A resounding noise, unescapable, you are trapped. In ones own personal hell. *let me know of any improvements that could be made* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kayleigh-johnstone Posted April 21, 2014 Share Posted April 21, 2014 Its amazing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ddraig Posted April 22, 2014 Share Posted April 22, 2014 Its good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Painted_Whore♥~ Posted April 28, 2014 Share Posted April 28, 2014 Interesting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
akah4Eau6 Posted May 1, 2014 Share Posted May 1, 2014 Merely sought to introduce myself and say shalom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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