mybrokenlessthenthree Posted June 11, 2014 Share Posted June 11, 2014 (edited) Begin just an opinion Go to the beach and walk in the water blindfolded, you don't know where your going but you know your getting deeper, that's what the build up feels like, its starts out as a feeling then turns into a quit thought which then turns in a quit word then that becomes louder and louder until its a battle cry, you keep getting deeper until your drowned. Your want to breathe you want air, imagine what it feels like to be pulled out to breathe to sooth the fire that is building in your lunges, that's what cutting is, relief.Sweet smell of blood, the salty taste of blood when you bit your cheeks, eventually you get used to it hell can get comfy when you settle in. The sweet release of flesh, the feeling warms you and you can breathe suddenly you forget everything, it becomes you own personal mixture of heroine, you go without but you can never truly forget, your can pretend it didn't happen but you still have scars, scars that take years to heal, but when your completely mutilated just longing for death because cutting doesn't work anymore because every breathe is constant agony as you broken by a condescending world, no rest for the weary... cutting? Relief from all the pain that you've been drowning in, relief from not feeling good enough... Sick and tired.Trapped! Body wrapped with sharp pain because my body wasn’t made to contain all this rage! My mind wasn’t made, my eyes weren’t made, my soul was not made to behold what shackles my soul now. Look and the mirror and smile, but its meaningless every smile is just another tear because its cursed you unforgettable... Let us not lie to ourselves Brokenness is the aftermath. Brokenness is the aftermath... Sadness is like a drug, it takes you away from reality and makes you see a whole new way. 'The First WishStar Light, Star Bright, first star I see tonightI Wish I may, I wish I might be granted the wish I wish tonight.I wish I could leave, forget every thing that is aroundI wish I could see what is not yet found.I wish I could live like a worn out houndI wish I could be silent and not make a soundI wish I could have insight to see; a pitcher on the other moundYet, I cannot.The future holds twisted FatesThe fun has to be ratedThe end must come soonYou have to realize the tuneSong of the world, I star to sound like a loonA broken record now looking as dark as the moonSo now the end is here.Nothing is ever mereThe Second wishStar light, Star Bright, first star I see tonight,I wish I may, I wish I might be granted the wish I wish tonightA hidden foe stalks me ever so closeI wish I knew who I fear the mostGrant me, oh stars, a look into the future timeI wish I could see what life would be likeI want to know the ending to my life?s bookI wish I could take just a slight lookMaybe I would see my pain coming out,or a room of nothingness as I looked aboutPlease let be see what fate has plannedFor I wish to know if this has been out flamedWhile I try not to listen for more painKeep hanging on, Days become mundaneAn early weakness falls over me nowPain filling my mind; another storm cloudStars shall grant me my second wishThough the time has come, I can not finishThe Third wishStar Light, Star bright, first star I see tonightI wish I may, I wish I might, be granted the last wish of my lifeI wish I could hide the pain that I feel.A stalker I now see as realI wish I could be silent; no sound to makeNow, I only have my life to takeI wish I could see what?s not yet foundNow I cry, not making a soundI wish I didnt have to feel fates lookBecause now I know the ending to my life?s bookI wish I could leave; forgetting all that bindsNow you must read between my linesI wish the stars could tellShe now has FellInto Darkness, out of lightAll is dim that was brightShe now makes the great fallShe has been hung, her tongue lollsEyes once bright and cheeryNow are sad and wearyI say your poem one last time; to hear it richFor this is the finally; the Great Finish.Star Light, Star bright, first star I see tonightI wish I may, I wish I might, be granted the last wish of my life Edited June 11, 2014 by mybrokenlessthenthree Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
That_MCR_Kid Posted June 28, 2014 Share Posted June 28, 2014 This. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadyNightz Posted July 22, 2014 Share Posted July 22, 2014 Depression to me is like... You dont wake up from a nightmare.. Sometimes you dream that you're falling and then you feel it too.. Thats when you normally wake up i dont.. Just keep on falling.. Friends? What's that? Family? Who cares? ..there is no reason to wake up anymore.. Why should i go to school? Future..what future? Depression is just realizing you'll die anyway..even if you have anything you want.. You wil die! So what's the point.. Why would you keep hurting yourself if you will die . There you arw..sitting in this black hole..no way out..there is a knife in front of you.. The pain and hurt cant be taken away..but what if i can hurt mysf even more..maybe that will take the pain in my heart away.. You take the knife..put in on your skin and start to cry it all comes out! You start to cut.. See the blood.. Its not enough! You are still in pain! Its bleeding as hell.. Deep into your skin.. Thats when the tears are dryed out.. The pain from the wounds are hurting more then your soulf..for now.. Its a relieve..but how long will it take befor the awfull pain will return? :'3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXlostinmyworldXx Posted July 22, 2014 Share Posted July 22, 2014 For me it's an involuntary overreaction to sad things far out of proportion to reality, but that I am not able to control or reason myself out of, even though I know I should be able to. I am talking about clinical depression, not just feeling sad. It's a degree of emotion that's not normal for the circumstances relating to it and I know it is at the time but still I can't get it under control. It's a miserable condition. Mine is only controlled by medication from my doctor and I had to have it changed because the original meds didn't work. It is a medical condition, not necessarily just an emotional one, in my understanding and experience. I hope that helps someone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Remix Posted July 23, 2014 Share Posted July 23, 2014 I have no idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The guy in the corner Posted July 24, 2014 Share Posted July 24, 2014 From some web diagnosing (WebMD, the like) I'm only moderate chronic depression, but here I go. It feels like just being completely useless. I don't want to do anything because I mess everything up, no one likes me, I hate myself, etc. To use a metaphor, it's kind of like being smothered in despair. I don't add up to society and there's nothing I can do but suicide. It makes me not want to live but then I think about death meaning no conscience or anything and put that kitchen knife down. And I lose my apatite to top it off :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXlostinmyworldXx Posted July 24, 2014 Share Posted July 24, 2014 (edited) I'm not a medical person, just someone who suffers from depression, but with me, when it gets going (if I forget my meds) it causes me to see everything in a negative light. The insidious part is that it all feels very real. But don't listen to that. Once I'm back on track again I realize what an illusion all of it was. Now I know that when you're in the grip of it, that's hard to believe, but it's true. It's the depression that makes it hard to believe. It's as though the depression is trying to defend itself by telling you that things really are that bad to keep you in its grip. I talked to my doctor about it and got some meds. That helped some but I still felt depressed. I had to go back and get different meds and now I'm fine. If I forget to take it, within half a day I get that negativity and then I know I forgot my pill. I hope that helps; I surely know what it's like. Edited July 24, 2014 by xXlostinmyworldXx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carlton Posted July 25, 2014 Share Posted July 25, 2014 it's when ur super sad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcrjade Posted July 25, 2014 Share Posted July 25, 2014 it's when ur super sad ... They mean what is depression like to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TyraTelleSmith Posted July 25, 2014 Share Posted July 25, 2014 You've described it really well For me it's like a constant black cloud that's following me I don't take medication Nor do I have counselling, but I used to have it and they told me pills won't be the right thing for me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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