zredtide Posted October 8, 2010 Posted October 8, 2010 My heart is bleeding and I don't know why. Your words are soothing even though they're lies. You're my drug, addicting and true. Though you give me pleasure, you destroy me too. You give me reason to breathe. but not enough to live. You're so undeniable, my life I'd give. Your hair is smooth and your lips are sweet. Though you're enchanting, you make me sick. I have kissed you once, held you twice. Nothing's more sweeter than your lies. You are my light in this dark world; the one who will guide me through. But you shine like a star inches away; are you even true? You've left me with a scarred heart; dying from the truth. I know everything now. And my favorite mistake is loving you.... One of my best poems! please tell me what you think ^^ =)
zredtide Posted October 9, 2010 Author Posted October 9, 2010 Thank you veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery much! =)))
Tommy'sLittleVampire Posted October 10, 2010 Posted October 10, 2010 wow thats a rlly good poem, i love it!!!
zredtide Posted October 12, 2010 Author Posted October 12, 2010 wow thats a rlly good poem' date=' i love it!!! [/quote'] Thanks! =))
xXxNoLoveOnlyPainxXx Posted October 13, 2010 Posted October 13, 2010 I this! another new favorite! You get flowers!
zredtide Posted October 14, 2010 Author Posted October 14, 2010 Thanks everyone! @xXxNoLoveOnlyPainxXx_Thanks for the flowers! I hope they're black roses ^^
zredtide Posted August 19, 2011 Author Posted August 19, 2011 Awww.... Thank you so much You might want to check out parts 2 and 3 and some of my other works )
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