zredtide Posted October 8, 2010 Share Posted October 8, 2010 My heart is bleeding and I don't know why. Your words are soothing even though they're lies. You're my drug, addicting and true. Though you give me pleasure, you destroy me too. You give me reason to breathe. but not enough to live. You're so undeniable, my life I'd give. Your hair is smooth and your lips are sweet. Though you're enchanting, you make me sick. I have kissed you once, held you twice. Nothing's more sweeter than your lies. You are my light in this dark world; the one who will guide me through. But you shine like a star inches away; are you even true? You've left me with a scarred heart; dying from the truth. I know everything now. And my favorite mistake is loving you.... One of my best poems! please tell me what you think ^^ =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted October 8, 2010 Share Posted October 8, 2010 i like this one alot too :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zredtide Posted October 9, 2010 Author Share Posted October 9, 2010 Thank you veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery much! =))) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted October 10, 2010 Share Posted October 10, 2010 no problem-o :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy'sLittleVampire Posted October 10, 2010 Share Posted October 10, 2010 wow thats a rlly good poem, i love it!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zredtide Posted October 12, 2010 Author Share Posted October 12, 2010 wow thats a rlly good poem' date=' i love it!!! [/quote'] Thanks! =)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXxNoLoveOnlyPainxXx Posted October 13, 2010 Share Posted October 13, 2010 I this! another new favorite! You get flowers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SheAteMyHeart Posted October 13, 2010 Share Posted October 13, 2010 It's amaziing I love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the darkangle Posted October 13, 2010 Share Posted October 13, 2010 that was good... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zredtide Posted October 14, 2010 Author Share Posted October 14, 2010 Thanks everyone! @xXxNoLoveOnlyPainxXx_Thanks for the flowers! I hope they're black roses ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest robin emo luv Posted November 10, 2010 Share Posted November 10, 2010 i luv it!!!its amazing:)!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxfeeledwithsorrowxx Posted November 10, 2010 Share Posted November 10, 2010 thats really awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zredtide Posted November 11, 2010 Author Share Posted November 11, 2010 hahaha. thanks guys =)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eminemlover Posted August 18, 2011 Share Posted August 18, 2011 AMAZING more then amazing good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zredtide Posted August 19, 2011 Author Share Posted August 19, 2011 Awww.... Thank you so much You might want to check out parts 2 and 3 and some of my other works ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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