endofgreen15 Posted October 16, 2010 Posted October 16, 2010 My Life is Nothing but full of Misery and Fear If you Just a take a moment and Hear My Cries will tell you that Im Weak and Scared If I End my Life Will You be Prepared Its been all visible from the Start But you couldnt see it cause you have no Heart My Life is just Fallen Apart Im Asking for My Last Chance Now so I Can Restart But I need your help and I am afraid I know this is the life iv Made Im ready to change my life for the Best Tired of feeling so much pain and stress I Do not want to end this Life Im Calling for you In this time of strife Please Help me Im Tired of being Alone Crying for Help is all I moan This is my last Call of reaching out Come try and help me and Ill tell you what Im crying about This is my last Call to you my Dear Before Im gone And now Longer here ***This is my first poem iv ever wrote! What do u guys think? i think its ok but not great. I had many mixed feelings at the time I was just trying to call out to anyone who was listening and it sure helped me! ***
zredtide Posted October 16, 2010 Posted October 16, 2010 I love it so much! I dont care if its your first. its so awesome! =)
eminemlover Posted May 5, 2011 Posted May 5, 2011 wow oh wow yep endo you have talent you have alot of it omg i actually cried please start righting again
endofgreen15 Posted May 5, 2011 Author Posted May 5, 2011 Thank you so Much I never thought of myself as A very good writer, but If you would like me to start writing Again I will try. Funny thing is I actually started a poem last night. Its another very deep poem, As Soon As I finish I will Post it. And I only write when I have a lot of things on my mind.
Guest Cutter'sLullaby023 Posted November 21, 2011 Posted November 21, 2011 Its really good lol. Better than any of mine proly haha.
endofgreen15 Posted November 21, 2011 Author Posted November 21, 2011 nah i highly Doubt that lol xD But thanks I really Appreciate it
Panty Raid Posted November 24, 2011 Posted November 24, 2011 O My FishNuggets!! Shawn ur Amazing!! its So Good!! Im so jealous!! my poems are nothing compared to this bro!! Pssshh Your Must Write More!!
xxMiserablexxElla♥ Posted November 26, 2011 Posted November 26, 2011 OMG! This so freaking awesome!! You're an amazing writer!! I loved it!!! X')
Panty Raid Posted December 7, 2011 Posted December 7, 2011 Not on topic but o well -shruggs- when do i ever stay on topic?? xD -jumps on shawns back and forces cookie in mouth- eat the cookie!! >:3 mawahaha Revenge!! hehe that ish alls :3
inyourskinnies Posted December 11, 2011 Posted December 11, 2011 *u* Jayy is amazed. *le cheers* AHMAZING POEMM SHAWN.
CutBabiesNotApples Posted January 7, 2012 Posted January 7, 2012 I dont believe this is your first poem... I sounds like a passion of words typed out into something someone would call beautiful. I love your emotion they tell so much. and u should be ashamed to even call this "ok". <3
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