endofgreen15 Posted November 13, 2010 Share Posted November 13, 2010 I'm Falling into a deep Depression Crying out for help but getting no Reaction Feeling like Life is Prison Calling for help but no one will take time to Listen So Many calls to the Friends and Family I Love Even Tried to Calling to the So Called Gods Above Sitting and Waiting as the Sands of Time fall Trying to Hold my Head up High above it All Could've done so many things to try to Heal this Pain Like Drugs and Alcohol But Im not Insane Everything I Love, Find's A Way To Leave Or Die So Im Left Here with this Confusion, Trying Not To Cry Holding all my emotions deep inside Feeling like i just need to hide But my Feelings are so strong for you I bet your feeling the same inside too Baby You are the One I need to Talk too I thought Our Friendship and love was so true I Just need you to come back to me so we can get over this and can be set free I just want to be able to hold you I know you want to hold me in your arms too So many mixed feelings hidden deep inside Lets talk about it and let this all behind Without you I feel so scared and Alone You were there for me when i would cry and moan I cant seem to let you go But If you Dont come back to me Ill kill myself nice and slow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
endofgreen15 Posted November 13, 2010 Author Share Posted November 13, 2010 I really love this poem....I wrote this to a special someone so she knew what i was feeling about her after we started fighting!! (long story) This Poem seem to help me reach out to her and fix our friendship!! Im not a big writer but i felt like i needed to write her something so she would know how i felt!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zredtide Posted November 13, 2010 Share Posted November 13, 2010 awesome! dude, its magnificent!! =)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eminemlover Posted May 5, 2011 Share Posted May 5, 2011 lol you ask me wat i think i think that this is an amzing poem i love it so much it shows that there is really boys with puer and true hearts lol if only there were more people who though this way lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
endofgreen15 Posted May 5, 2011 Author Share Posted May 5, 2011 Thanks Haha Well I guess im a one of a kind then lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eminemlover Posted May 5, 2011 Share Posted May 5, 2011 you knowyou it lol hahahaha ur amazing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
endofgreen15 Posted May 5, 2011 Author Share Posted May 5, 2011 haha thanks but no your more amazing lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eminemlover Posted May 6, 2011 Share Posted May 6, 2011 i know lol jks hahah thanks lol keep wrighting and post them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
endofgreen15 Posted May 6, 2011 Author Share Posted May 6, 2011 sure thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BisexualEmoEmilyxO Posted May 6, 2011 Share Posted May 6, 2011 this poem is amazing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
endofgreen15 Posted May 7, 2011 Author Share Posted May 7, 2011 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Cutter'sLullaby023 Posted November 21, 2011 Share Posted November 21, 2011 Wow. Amazing. I hope I'll get as good as you. And again. SO amazing lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
endofgreen15 Posted November 21, 2011 Author Share Posted November 21, 2011 lol thanks I appreciate it Alot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panty Raid Posted November 24, 2011 Share Posted November 24, 2011 Shawn are you even human? lmfao Idk which one i like the best this one or your other one I really like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxMiserablexxElla♥ Posted November 26, 2011 Share Posted November 26, 2011 OMG! This poem is so freaking amazing! Like... WOW! It came straight from the heart. I hope 2 be as good of a writer as you.. You're AWESOME!!! X'D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
endofgreen15 Posted November 26, 2011 Author Share Posted November 26, 2011 Wow thanks I didn't think it was that great but thank you it means a lot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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