awesome.amber Posted November 16, 2010 Share Posted November 16, 2010 [align=center]You sit and wonder why They can just turn their back on you You sit and wonder why She was your best friend and left you You sit and wonder why Life isn?t like the beautiful night sky She gave birth to you Is you best friend you thought forever Then she turns on you and left you Yet you wonder why Life isn?t like the beautiful night sky She left and came back Then left again without saying goodbye That woman who gave birth to you Hurt you, and now you pretend not to care You no longer wonder why Life isn?t like the beautiful night sky Your heart is filled with sadness That has turned to hate Now you say you never want to see or speak to her again She abandoned you So now you abandoned her You?re through, and sad So you sit and wonder why Life isn?t like the beautiful night sky[/align] i tired ik it mite not b great but like i said i tried. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ilove_LKB1994 Posted November 16, 2010 Share Posted November 16, 2010 Your poem is good... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesome.amber Posted November 16, 2010 Author Share Posted November 16, 2010 thnx girlie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest X.Broken Crystal glass.X Posted November 19, 2010 Share Posted November 19, 2010 This poem is really good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesome.amber Posted November 19, 2010 Author Share Posted November 19, 2010 thank u thank u Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesome.amber Posted December 3, 2010 Author Share Posted December 3, 2010 aw d 1st poem i ever wrote no1 else posted... *sigh* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
punk301 Posted December 4, 2010 Share Posted December 4, 2010 ur poem is well versed it brought me to my own past, so i may confront my own issues with my mom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zredtide Posted December 4, 2010 Share Posted December 4, 2010 nice poem =)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesome.amber Posted December 6, 2010 Author Share Posted December 6, 2010 thnxs guys.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted December 8, 2010 Share Posted December 8, 2010 i like it alot.. it was really well written. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesome.amber Posted December 8, 2010 Author Share Posted December 8, 2010 haha well thanks.. and it was my 1st and last lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
punk301 Posted December 8, 2010 Share Posted December 8, 2010 last nooo dont give up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesome.amber Posted December 9, 2010 Author Share Posted December 9, 2010 i cant write Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
punk301 Posted December 9, 2010 Share Posted December 9, 2010 then wtf is this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesome.amber Posted December 9, 2010 Author Share Posted December 9, 2010 its sumthng i wrote. but its so hard for me.. dat was easy cuz it was sumthng happening to greg. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
punk301 Posted December 9, 2010 Share Posted December 9, 2010 thats wat poetry is, its from ur spirit ur memories, u real live them through writing u write about how u r feeling Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesome.amber Posted December 9, 2010 Author Share Posted December 9, 2010 well yea .. but i do suck at writing though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesome.amber Posted February 1, 2011 Author Share Posted February 1, 2011 i wish i cld write more to get feelns out put it looks like dis rly will b my only poem *sigh* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lexi.broken.angel.shea Posted February 15, 2011 Share Posted February 15, 2011 that is so good. i really like it.. your really good.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesome.amber Posted February 16, 2011 Author Share Posted February 16, 2011 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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