Glass.Tears Posted November 16, 2010 Share Posted November 16, 2010 the heart falls. it hits the ground. what else is there left for me. can someone save me from this distress. it shatters into a million pieces. and the only thing left of it. is the love that it once shared. but now thats gone. and so is my heart. now a single tear falls. can you see it. can you see the pain you caused. can you see the memories we once shared. and now when it hits the floor. so does my heart. now look into my eyes. and tell me can you see the story it once told. about a girl who fell in love. now that love is gone. now the story ends, and so did we... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest X.Broken Crystal glass.X Posted February 13, 2011 Share Posted February 13, 2011 I love your poem, its really deep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmberHasIt Posted February 13, 2011 Share Posted February 13, 2011 Awwies. That's beautiful, Rani. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glass.Tears Posted February 14, 2011 Author Share Posted February 14, 2011 hehe thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest InkSickVegan Posted February 14, 2011 Share Posted February 14, 2011 i love this poem! its very relateble and i love the part thats like "now look into my eyes. and tell me can you see the story it once told." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glass.Tears Posted February 14, 2011 Author Share Posted February 14, 2011 thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tears_Will_Fall Posted February 15, 2011 Share Posted February 15, 2011 I remember that poem and i love it keep on writing rani! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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