Tommy'sLittleVampire Posted November 25, 2010 Share Posted November 25, 2010 Depression By: Amanda Augustus Are you just the walking dead? Do you feel lifeless? Do you want to hide yourself under the sheets of your bed? Why do you lay there, motionless? Is your heart still beating? Do you long to be alone in darkness? Have you given up eating? Are these feelings just a sickness? Does anything matter to you anymore? Are you ready to die? Who are you feeling like this for? Do you want to curl up and cry? Can you wait till the cool blade touches your wrist? What do you call this feeling? Do you want to use those clenched fist? When will you start heeling? Yes, your body moves, but your soul is still, Yes, your words are ?death is upon me? Yes, to hide from the ghost ready to kill, Because, you are too weak to move, only to fall to your knees. Yes, but only physically, Yes, but you think everyone else does too, Yes, because eating hurts you mentally, No, its all you. No, only he did, and you two are now apart, Yes, your life has stopped; you don?t know where it will go, The one who broke your heart, Yes, to let the tears flow, No, the bleeding of your wrist is appeasing, Depression, is the only name, Yes, to see someone else bleeding, Not till he returns, will you be the same. This is the feeling of depression? I just found this poem, It was written back in March so it is very old! feed back please... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinupdoll Posted November 25, 2010 Share Posted November 25, 2010 pretty! i luved it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy'sLittleVampire Posted November 25, 2010 Author Share Posted November 25, 2010 pretty! i luved it! ohh...well I think this is one of mi worst! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinupdoll Posted November 25, 2010 Share Posted November 25, 2010 really? i liked it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy'sLittleVampire Posted November 26, 2010 Author Share Posted November 26, 2010 really? i liked it. yes, this is like mi worst Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sensitive313 Posted December 2, 2010 Share Posted December 2, 2010 Depression By: Amanda Augustus Are you just the walking dead? Do you feel lifeless? Do you want to hide yourself under the sheets of your bed? Why do you lay there' date=' motionless? Is your heart still beating? Do you long to be alone in darkness? Have you given up eating? Are these feelings just a sickness? Does anything matter to you anymore? Are you ready to die? Who are you feeling like this for? Do you want to curl up and cry? Can you wait till the cool blade touches your wrist? What do you call this feeling? Do you want to use those clenched fist? When will you start heeling? Yes, your body moves, but your soul is still, Yes, your words are ?death is upon me? Yes, to hide from the ghost ready to kill, Because, you are too weak to move, only to fall to your knees. Yes, but only physically, Yes, but you think everyone else does too, Yes, because eating hurts you mentally, No, its all you. No, only he did, and you two are now apart, Yes, your life has stopped; you don?t know where it will go, The one who broke your heart, Yes, to let the tears flow, No, the bleeding of your wrist is appeasing, Depression, is the only name, Yes, to see someone else bleeding, Not till he returns, will you be the same. This is the feeling of depression? I just found this poem, It was written back in March so it is very old! feed back please...[/font'] it sounds like a nicer version of my diary lol but yes i loved it. it caught my attention Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zredtide Posted December 4, 2010 Share Posted December 4, 2010 an awesome description of depression:)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy'sLittleVampire Posted December 4, 2010 Author Share Posted December 4, 2010 Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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