glinalee Posted November 29, 2010 Share Posted November 29, 2010 all this i try to hide now all these feelings that i keep will eventually find it's way out somehow all this that is so deep everywhere i turn i see your face i'll try to learn that you can't be erased i didnt want to loose you no matter what happend all this time i thought i knew that you didnt want it to end i guess i lost everything i'll try hard to get you back i wanted anything just not a heart attack nothing to break me just you to confide in why didnt you see that you were in my heart within now everytime i see you i cut these wounds to breathe but you already knew in fact you offered to on me you offered to end my own life cuz you didnt care now im in all this strife so i cut everywhere i try to be there for you i try not to cry i try to stay calm with everything you do but then again i want to die i put on my fake smile so you dont know i still love you i try to stay for awhile but i still love what you say or do i didnt wanna loose you no matter what happend all this time i thought i knew that you didnt want it to end Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
glinalee Posted November 29, 2010 Author Share Posted November 29, 2010 it's other poem it's not the best cuz none of my poems are the bets lolz but im still proud of this as well i hope it influences people to write poems and well i hope you guys enjoy it well thanks and please rate and comment thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinupdoll Posted November 29, 2010 Share Posted November 29, 2010 luv it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Guest rawr.ima.dinosaur Posted November 29, 2010 Share Posted November 29, 2010 its very good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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