xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted November 30, 2010 Posted November 30, 2010 [align=center]i curl my hair, paint my face i still look like a damn disgrace i wake up each morning, with you on my mind try to look nice, but pretty i can not find i thought maybe you would like me more if i just looked like a pretty little whore so here i am, face in this mask here i am and now i ask why don't you still love me you ripped me open can't you see i'm living in a masquerade you can't see but each day i fade i die a little more inside hoping with sympathy i'll collide hoping you'll pull me back under your arm but hoping is only doing me harm so still i'll wake up each morning painting my face to look so adorning only to be knocked back down left feeling like a silly painted clown i'll still wake up each morning, curl my hair only to hear how you don't care just so you know each morning i awake i spend mourning this burning heart break[/align]
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted November 30, 2010 Author Posted November 30, 2010 eh poetry ... poetry ... poetry ... feedback? good or bad it doesn't matter.. :]
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted December 2, 2010 Author Posted December 2, 2010 thank you everyone :] and tommy!!!! I MISS YA!! where have you been?! haha
Guest rawr.ima.dinosaur Posted December 2, 2010 Posted December 2, 2010 howd you become so great at writing?
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted December 2, 2010 Author Posted December 2, 2010 haha i have no clue, i never thought i was very good, but i've filled notebooks with poetry since 5th grade so i guess i jus write ALOTT so eventually it gets better haha
Guest rawr.ima.dinosaur Posted December 2, 2010 Posted December 2, 2010 ever think of writing poetry professionally?
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted December 2, 2010 Author Posted December 2, 2010 never crossed my mind but that would be the best job in the world. writing is one of the few things i could never ever stop doing.
Guest rawr.ima.dinosaur Posted December 2, 2010 Posted December 2, 2010 write a book of poetry ill buy it
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted December 2, 2010 Author Posted December 2, 2010 CHEAYAA! haha xD i may attempt such things hahaha
Guest rawr.ima.dinosaur Posted December 3, 2010 Posted December 3, 2010 itll be the first book ive read since dr. suess jk jk buts its gunna be the bestest
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted December 4, 2010 Author Posted December 4, 2010 ooo i love dr. suess haha when i was little my favorite book was green eggs and ham because there was sam i am in the book hahaha xD
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