xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted November 30, 2010 Share Posted November 30, 2010 [align=center]i curl my hair, paint my face i still look like a damn disgrace i wake up each morning, with you on my mind try to look nice, but pretty i can not find i thought maybe you would like me more if i just looked like a pretty little whore so here i am, face in this mask here i am and now i ask why don't you still love me you ripped me open can't you see i'm living in a masquerade you can't see but each day i fade i die a little more inside hoping with sympathy i'll collide hoping you'll pull me back under your arm but hoping is only doing me harm so still i'll wake up each morning painting my face to look so adorning only to be knocked back down left feeling like a silly painted clown i'll still wake up each morning, curl my hair only to hear how you don't care just so you know each morning i awake i spend mourning this burning heart break[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted November 30, 2010 Author Share Posted November 30, 2010 eh poetry ... poetry ... poetry ... feedback? good or bad it doesn't matter.. :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EG Tommy Posted November 30, 2010 Share Posted November 30, 2010 Amazing as always. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
glinalee Posted November 30, 2010 Share Posted November 30, 2010 i love it please keep writting??? lolz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy'sLittleVampire Posted November 30, 2010 Share Posted November 30, 2010 awesome! i love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted December 2, 2010 Author Share Posted December 2, 2010 thank you everyone :] and tommy!!!! I MISS YA!! where have you been?! haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest rawr.ima.dinosaur Posted December 2, 2010 Share Posted December 2, 2010 howd you become so great at writing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted December 2, 2010 Author Share Posted December 2, 2010 haha i have no clue, i never thought i was very good, but i've filled notebooks with poetry since 5th grade so i guess i jus write ALOTT so eventually it gets better haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest rawr.ima.dinosaur Posted December 2, 2010 Share Posted December 2, 2010 ever think of writing poetry professionally? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted December 2, 2010 Author Share Posted December 2, 2010 never crossed my mind but that would be the best job in the world. writing is one of the few things i could never ever stop doing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest rawr.ima.dinosaur Posted December 2, 2010 Share Posted December 2, 2010 write a book of poetry ill buy it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted December 2, 2010 Author Share Posted December 2, 2010 CHEAYAA! haha xD i may attempt such things hahaha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest rawr.ima.dinosaur Posted December 3, 2010 Share Posted December 3, 2010 yay exciting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted December 3, 2010 Author Share Posted December 3, 2010 haha fer sure xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest rawr.ima.dinosaur Posted December 3, 2010 Share Posted December 3, 2010 itll be the first book ive read since dr. suess jk jk buts its gunna be the bestest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted December 4, 2010 Author Share Posted December 4, 2010 ooo i love dr. suess haha when i was little my favorite book was green eggs and ham because there was sam i am in the book hahaha xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest rawr.ima.dinosaur Posted December 5, 2010 Share Posted December 5, 2010 lol wowww sam Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pinupdoll Posted December 5, 2010 Share Posted December 5, 2010 it was amazing sam! luved it as always Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted December 7, 2010 Author Share Posted December 7, 2010 thnnnxx yew Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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