xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted November 30, 2010 Share Posted November 30, 2010 [align=center]she wakes up, splashes water on her face turns on the stereo, takes a cd out of the case the lyrics play over in her head all day 'rip me open, sew me shut pull me from this bitter rut take my heart tear it in two still i'll say that i love you' it's her life in a song the song plays way too long it never ends her heart never mends she can't keep him from stealing it and in her mind these words will sit 'rip me open, sew me shut pull me from this bitter rut take my heart tear it in two still i'll say that i love you.' he's only here to hurt her worse hurt her til she's carried off in the hearse until her coffin is six feet under the earth she wrote him a note for all that it's worth she thought of him during her last breath and what were her final words before death? 'rip me open, sew me shut pull me out of this bitter rut take my heart tear it in two still i'll say that i love you' then one shot, one bullet to the brain no life left in a single vein her song finally ended her life was though then he read the letter bidding her adieu it read 'to you, the love of my life after you left i couldn't handle this strife 'you ripped me open, sewed me shut pulled me from this bitter rut you took my heart tore it in two and i hope you know i always loved you.'[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted November 30, 2010 Author Share Posted November 30, 2010 eh feedback? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melody Posted November 30, 2010 Share Posted November 30, 2010 i like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted November 30, 2010 Author Share Posted November 30, 2010 thhnnxx :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
glinalee Posted November 30, 2010 Share Posted November 30, 2010 it's amazing i love it wtire more please? lolz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted December 2, 2010 Author Share Posted December 2, 2010 thank you :] glina: if you like my writing you can look back in the poetry forum and i have ALOTT of other poems on here too .. they're just kinda old haha :] but thank you :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest rawr.ima.dinosaur Posted December 2, 2010 Share Posted December 2, 2010 its great! well everything you write is amazing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted December 2, 2010 Author Share Posted December 2, 2010 awh thank you :] that really means alot to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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