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[align=center]i will never admit my love outloud

never until the day i'm enshroud

i'll look at you with loathing eyes

you'll never see what underlies

i'll only glare and leer

i'll only tease and jeer

but i hide behind a cover

a cover opposite of a lover

i say that i hate you

these words i will stick like glue

hate.. it's a false mask hidden in my eye

hate.. this word is my four letter lie[/align]

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i wish i cld write like u.. i suck at writing.. my only poem up here is the beautiful night sky... not even dat many ppl posted on it.. and i only wrote it cuz i had to write a poem for class and i posted it up here to see what ppl thought.. but u r a rly great writer.

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i'm sure you cant be that bad.. imma look up yer poem :] and thank you it truely does mean alot to me to know that you like my writing. i never thought i was any good :\ but idk everyone says people are more critical of themselves so i guess that could play a part..

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no problem-o

yeah punk is a great writer' date=' same with zredtide. but theres alot of great writers on here... lots and lots, i love it. haha

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I love it sammy =) it reminded me of a qoute we have here, i dont know if you guys know it too, but it goes like this: the more you hate, the more you love.

 

thanks! =))

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