xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted December 8, 2010 Share Posted December 8, 2010 [align=center]i will never admit my love outloud never until the day i'm enshroud i'll look at you with loathing eyes you'll never see what underlies i'll only glare and leer i'll only tease and jeer but i hide behind a cover a cover opposite of a lover i say that i hate you these words i will stick like glue hate.. it's a false mask hidden in my eye hate.. this word is my four letter lie[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesome.amber Posted December 8, 2010 Share Posted December 8, 2010 oh nice. i like dat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted December 8, 2010 Author Share Posted December 8, 2010 thank you :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesome.amber Posted December 8, 2010 Share Posted December 8, 2010 i wish i cld write like u.. i suck at writing.. my only poem up here is the beautiful night sky... not even dat many ppl posted on it.. and i only wrote it cuz i had to write a poem for class and i posted it up here to see what ppl thought.. but u r a rly great writer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted December 8, 2010 Author Share Posted December 8, 2010 i'm sure you cant be that bad.. imma look up yer poem :] and thank you it truely does mean alot to me to know that you like my writing. i never thought i was any good :\ but idk everyone says people are more critical of themselves so i guess that could play a part.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesome.amber Posted December 8, 2010 Share Posted December 8, 2010 yea dat is true.. haha my poem up here was a miracle i wrote off my bf experience .. but other than dat i suck.. and dnt doubt urself cuz u dnt i enjoy reading ur stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted December 8, 2010 Author Share Posted December 8, 2010 i hunted it down to read it :] haha i also posted on it i actually thought it was really good, i liked it alot.. i'm glad you enjoy it.. :] i love reading other peoples poetry tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesome.amber Posted December 8, 2010 Share Posted December 8, 2010 well i read ur post lol.. and thnks. it was my 1st and last. and i do.. and yea i like reading Punk301 and sumothers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted December 8, 2010 Author Share Posted December 8, 2010 no problem-o yeah punk is a great writer, same with zredtide. but theres alot of great writers on here... lots and lots, i love it. haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesome.amber Posted December 8, 2010 Share Posted December 8, 2010 yea me too.. gives me sumthng to read Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted December 8, 2010 Author Share Posted December 8, 2010 yes indeed :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zredtide Posted December 10, 2010 Share Posted December 10, 2010 no problem-o yeah punk is a great writer' date=' same with zredtide. but theres alot of great writers on here... lots and lots, i love it. haha [/quote'] I love it sammy =) it reminded me of a qoute we have here, i dont know if you guys know it too, but it goes like this: the more you hate, the more you love. thanks! =)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted December 11, 2010 Author Share Posted December 11, 2010 i never heard it but i like it haha :] and thank you and anytime buddy i love your writing :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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