Sade poem

[Blackdemon21]

Was I Dead or Alive I cant feel my legs or my body all I can do is lay down and rest and think of all I have done all I can think of was hate and depression all because I slit my wrist as I watched blood flow down my wrist and as my veins gushed out blood I remembered that now body cared about me so I just wanted to kill myself . Because I thought I was dead but I wasn?t .I felt pain when I slight my wrist but I didn?t care what I did.

 

By: Blackdemon21

[awesome.amber]

yes i do like ur poem. but i feel like there shld b jst a tid bit more to it.. i jst felt like it ended ... which cld mean sumthng in ur poem.. if dats how u meant it.. sorry u dnt have to pay attention to wat i said.. but yea i like it.

[punk301]

its dark