Blackdemon21 Posted December 14, 2010 Share Posted December 14, 2010 Was I Dead or Alive I cant feel my legs or my body all I can do is lay down and rest and think of all I have done all I can think of was hate and depression all because I slit my wrist as I watched blood flow down my wrist and as my veins gushed out blood I remembered that now body cared about me so I just wanted to kill myself . Because I thought I was dead but I wasn?t .I felt pain when I slight my wrist but I didn?t care what I did. By: Blackdemon21 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesome.amber Posted December 14, 2010 Share Posted December 14, 2010 yes i do like ur poem. but i feel like there shld b jst a tid bit more to it.. i jst felt like it ended ... which cld mean sumthng in ur poem.. if dats how u meant it.. sorry u dnt have to pay attention to wat i said.. but yea i like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
punk301 Posted December 14, 2010 Share Posted December 14, 2010 its dark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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