the darkangle Posted December 15, 2010 Posted December 15, 2010 The cool water that touches my skin as I have one hand on the wall and my feet pushed up against it. The sound of my heart beating just waiting for the person to pull the triger on the gun. As I wait patiently the only thing going througt my mind is hurry up shoot the gun and let's go. As the person pulls the triger on the gun I take off without looking whos on either side of me or how fast they are going. Then until I get to the end that when I see where I come in.
the darkangle Posted December 15, 2010 Author Posted December 15, 2010 so this is my only one so far so I may or may not be puting more
Tommy'sLittleVampire Posted December 17, 2010 Posted December 17, 2010 i'm assuming you swim like in competitions Sounds good, i was really thinking that it was going to end badly or something, in this poem. Like you drown or something else bad...or maybe that's just because i'm afraid of the water.
the darkangle Posted December 17, 2010 Author Posted December 17, 2010 wow your good I do in the special olympics
Tommy'sLittleVampire Posted December 17, 2010 Posted December 17, 2010 wow your good I do in the special olympics awesome! keep it up and keep writing
the darkangle Posted December 17, 2010 Author Posted December 17, 2010 thanks I'll be suer to do that
Tommy'sLittleVampire Posted December 19, 2010 Posted December 19, 2010 thanks I'll be suer to do that well that's good!
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