Operations

[zredtide]

Lying on a stiff bed,

I thought I was dead.

A lot of people around me,

Their eyes are all I can see.

 

Then my vision blurs,

Everyone's talking in a slur.

I close my eyes and sleep,

Waiting for slumber deep.

 

Pain tries to awake,

A sensation that is fake;

But to no avail,

What an epic fail.

 

Cut out my heart

So my life will cease to start.

Consider taking my lungs;

The banshees have already sung.

 

Will you take out my eyes

So I wouldnt see your lies?

What else will you take from me?

Will you even set me free?

 

Will you stop using your scalpel;

There's no more light from the candle.

Will you even dig me a grave?

Or will I forever be your slave?

 

Inspired from Senses Fail - Buried A Lie

 

feedback pls ^^

[zredtide]

I think I need a better title ^^

any suggestions?

[xSAMMYxSUICIDEx]

ooo i like this one alott and i think the title is good :] i really like this one tho

[zredtide]

thanks sammy! but the song is better LOL

[Tommy'sLittleVampire]

Keith, that is really really good!!

[zredtide]

hahaha, Thanks Amanda! =D

[Tommy'sLittleVampire]

you're welcome!

[xSAMMYxSUICIDEx]

well either way.. i like itt :]

[Melody]

i like it :3

[zredtide]

thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu both ^^ =DD