my song

[Purple_haze]

another song i made...havent really finished don't know what else to put...got any ideas?

 

I don't know what this is

Because you make it real

It is just like your kiss

When you touch and reach for me

 

I fly high

Into the sky

Like a bird

Has just come by

 

When you whisper a single word to me

My heart beats that fast

I don't want you to ever let me be

I won't ever let you go

Because you will be my last

 

I fly high

Into the sky

Like a bird

Has just come by

 

But this is the time i will break free

And when i see you

This will be a goodbye

From me

[XXshallowXsoulsXX]

in the chorus you should change "come" to "gone". Just sayin :3

[Lostsoul.]

I agree with shallow soul other than that its awesome

[Purple_haze]

thank you so much you guys