Fading Away

[xshatteredsoulx]

[align=center]Whispers fading away in the dark

holding back my fear

Now all the memories of her start

Grey days sweep over my head

Letting myself fade into nothingness

I condemn myself and cry

Wishing my heart would make its last beat and die

Keep everything inside

Haunting my every dream

I have no soul to redeem

A girl stole my everything away

In this deep suffering I stay

I seem tear myself apart

Past the forest and into the lonly field

Theres a razor and a pill bottle for me

My intention of death will not yield

Watch one last sunset holding you tight

Breathing in the cool air smelling your sweet scent

Embracing death without a fight

I give you a kiss and smile

Im fading away into the light

You scream not to leave but im already gone

My body goes limp and you let loose your tears[/align]

[maxgreenluver]

I love you habibi and im super glad that your not going to do this anymore. you are the love of my life <3 btw amazing poem though everything do is amazing you should know that cuz your a super amazing person <3 i love you again. and bigger kisses <3

[xshatteredsoulx]

I love you too habibi <3 <3 <3 everything about is amazing and utterly perfect <3 biiigger kisses from me <3

[maxgreenluver]

I love you too habibi <3 <3 <3 everything about is amazing and utterly perfect <3 biiigger kisses from me <3

 

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 i love you soooooo much <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3

[xshatteredsoulx]

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 I love you sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much it cant be explained in words, only kisses hehehe <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

[maxgreenluver]

i looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove you soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much as well <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 you'd be getting huge kisses now <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

[xshatteredsoulx]

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 i wanna do more than kiss you <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

[maxgreenluver]

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 i know you do i wuv wu <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

[xshatteredsoulx]

<3 i wuv wu toooo <3

[monkeysam]

All righty guys, cute but back to the poem.

 

This was really well written mate and i really identified with it.

Love the emotional rhyme scheme and the raw emotion in the imagery, you did good

 

anyways... dnt know you but love you both <3<3<3<3<3

 

(I felt left out lol)

[xshatteredsoulx]

Thank you

 

lol thanks for the love <3<3<3

[monkeysam]

Welcomes :-)

[Lostsoul.]

I really like it Liike sam said you did an amazing job on it.