emopoet123 Posted December 26, 2010 Share Posted December 26, 2010 Your beautiful Hate, Left me to sit and die, I don't mind cause i know that you were never there And I love how you never care I love your beautiful hate Now that i'm done I don't have to worry bout you cause your beautiful hate Has stabbed me in the heart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monkeysam Posted December 27, 2010 Share Posted December 27, 2010 Simple yet sweet my friend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lostsoul. Posted December 27, 2010 Share Posted December 27, 2010 It's very simple like Sam said..... it's good(: you should add more tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monkeysam Posted December 27, 2010 Share Posted December 27, 2010 I agree with Lostsoul, maybe use this as the first stanza or a chorus and then develop it into something more? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lostsoul. Posted December 27, 2010 Share Posted December 27, 2010 Yea thats what i was thinking sam. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest rawr.ima.dinosaur Posted December 27, 2010 Share Posted December 27, 2010 its good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lostsoul. Posted December 27, 2010 Share Posted December 27, 2010 I like it more now that its longer (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monkeysam Posted December 27, 2010 Share Posted December 27, 2010 I agree with lostsoul, i like the longer version Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emopoet123 Posted December 28, 2010 Author Share Posted December 28, 2010 I agree with lostsoul' date=' i like the longer version [/quote'] Thanks!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emopoet123 Posted December 28, 2010 Author Share Posted December 28, 2010 Thanks Guys!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zredtide Posted December 29, 2010 Share Posted December 29, 2010 beautiful =DD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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