Beautiful Hate

[emopoet123]

Your beautiful Hate,

Left me to sit and die,

I don't mind

cause i know

that you were never there

And I love how you never care

I love

your beautiful hate

Now that i'm done

I don't have to worry bout you

cause your beautiful hate

Has stabbed me in the heart

[monkeysam]

Simple yet sweet my friend

[Lostsoul.]

It's very simple like Sam said..... it's good(: you should add more tho.

[monkeysam]

I agree with Lostsoul, maybe use this as the first stanza or a chorus and then develop it into something more?

[Lostsoul.]

Yea thats what i was thinking sam.

[Guest rawr.ima.dinosaur]

its good

[Lostsoul.]

I like it more now that its longer (:

[monkeysam]

I agree with lostsoul, i like the longer version

[emopoet123]

I agree with lostsoul' date=' i like the longer version

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Thanks!!!!!

[emopoet123]

Thanks Guys!!!!!!!

[zredtide]

beautiful =DD