LittleEmo Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 Hey guys :3 So this poem is pretty short and I don't think its very good but you guys get to be the judge of that (: I might use this as part of the lyrics for a song I'm writing So yeah, this is it.. In this world, There is no room for dreams or wishes You just have to deal with what life throws at you But sometimes things cannot be dealt with Therefore, the life must end.. Comments & Suggestions? Thank youu :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesome.amber Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 i like it alot.. it seems like it has many to it.. and i like the idea of puting it in the song its seems like wit sum stuff add to it it cld b rly great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LittleEmo Posted January 3, 2011 Author Share Posted January 3, 2011 Awwee ^^ thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesome.amber Posted January 3, 2011 Share Posted January 3, 2011 welcome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emopoet123 Posted January 9, 2011 Share Posted January 9, 2011 I love it. And it would be amazing in a song!! Good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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