Dreams and wishes

[LittleEmo]

Hey guys :3 So this poem is pretty short and I don't think its very good but you guys get to be the judge of that (:

I might use this as part of the lyrics for a song I'm writing

So yeah, this is it..

 

In this world,

There is no room for dreams or wishes

You just have to deal with what life throws at you

But sometimes things cannot be dealt with

Therefore, the life must end..

 

Comments & Suggestions?

Thank youu :3

[awesome.amber]

i like it alot.. it seems like it has many to it.. and i like the idea of puting it in the song its seems like wit sum stuff add to it it cld b rly great.

[LittleEmo]

Awwee ^^ thanks

[awesome.amber]

welcome

[emopoet123]

I love it. And it would be amazing in a song!! Good work