emogirlie Posted January 9, 2011 Posted January 9, 2011 as i sit and wonder what i did so wrong to make you hate me you laugh and ignore the things i have to say I'm sorry that i tell the truth and all you do is sit there and decline it the fact is that you took my childhood form me the sad part is i call you daddy you wonder why they sent me away for a week well just look at the scars on my arms and you have your answer. some father
Guest Crimson Spade Posted January 9, 2011 Posted January 9, 2011 Its good but as my freind shane would say it would be better in poem form otherwise its realy good.
Darkchildmatt Posted January 9, 2011 Posted January 9, 2011 I agree it really shows true emotion,top notch
emogirlie Posted January 10, 2011 Author Posted January 10, 2011 thanks. i tend to write from my heart and how i feel. this website helps me do that
punk301 Posted January 10, 2011 Posted January 10, 2011 its a beatiful representation of ur own soul i applaude u
Guest Crimson Spade Posted January 10, 2011 Posted January 10, 2011 Shane is the voice of Knowledge lissen
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