XxEmoWolfiexX Posted January 17, 2011 Posted January 17, 2011 These tears I cry mean nothing to you... never have never will... this blood i spilled for you... you never cared about the blood... all you ever cared about was her... you never knew it was hurting me.... i tried to tell you but... you never understood.... all this
endofgreen15 Posted January 17, 2011 Posted January 17, 2011 VERY nice Poem!! I absolutely love this!
XxEmoWolfiexX Posted January 17, 2011 Author Posted January 17, 2011 Thanks Is there anything I could do to make it better in any way?
punk301 Posted January 17, 2011 Posted January 17, 2011 i think its very nice as well but it should be better organized so the reader does not have to work to read it like up and down like the other poem u wrote
XxEmoWolfiexX Posted January 17, 2011 Author Posted January 17, 2011 i think its very nice as well but it should be better organized so the reader does not have to work to read it like up and down like the other poem u wrote Thanks for the advice
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