Zero Posted January 17, 2011 Posted January 17, 2011 Felling your cold dead eyes stare deep into mine, I wonder if this is it If this is our last moment, I wonder and tremble in fear, For the words I thought I'd never hear, Then you speak, My heart racing at its peak, I beg you to stay, But you've decided to go away, Like everyone else you and I part, I walk away with a shattred heart, Never agian I try to say That soon i wont be lost like today Might not be very good, dont know because I've yet to share any of my off the top of my head poems with anyone. hope you like it best I could get right now I did the best on grammar as I could, though its not one of my strong points so sorry for mispellings and stuff
XxEmoWolfiexX Posted January 17, 2011 Posted January 17, 2011 This is really good. Keep up the good work.
Zero Posted January 17, 2011 Author Posted January 17, 2011 This is really good. Keep up the good work. Thank ya, Thank ya
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