xX_Glue_Xx Posted January 18, 2011 Posted January 18, 2011 Hi guyz i'm super new here and thought i'd let you get to know me in the form of poetry now this is one of my first (that i let people see ) but i wuld like some feedback Dear person, you say that you're like a 'g6' well ill throw you off a building to see how fly you really are then i'll take your rotten boyfriend, tie him up and put him in my car ill take him to a cliff one that's very far and ill slit his fucking throat before driving off it in the car let me kno wht you think:huh::huh::huh:
Sheiky-baby Posted January 18, 2011 Posted January 18, 2011 UR PEOM TUCH MAH HART. UR EMUSHENOL PEOM MAYK ME WANT TO LAWK DAT NO GUHD MUTHEERFAWKER IN CAMEL CLUTCH AN MAYK DEM HUMBEL!
punk301 Posted January 19, 2011 Posted January 19, 2011 ur poem is quite violent i suspect u were broken hearted if so my condolences, and welcome to EP
Lostsoul. Posted January 20, 2011 Posted January 20, 2011 Hello welcome to ep(: I like your poem I think taking off the last.sentence would make it better other than that its awesome (:
...Kira... Posted January 20, 2011 Posted January 20, 2011 welcome, person with much violence. we shall get along well. =D
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