xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted January 21, 2011 Posted January 21, 2011 [align=center]i'm trying not to go insane trying not to feel this pain but when you loose the love of your life it feels like your heart has been stabbed with a knife you wake up every morning in misery that gives no warning when you start to feel this alone everything becomes a mindless drone i don't care about the time i've become as quiet as a mime i wish i could lay in bed all day until this hurt will go away each time i see his face each memory floods it's place i remember the first time he said to me i love you and it's meant to be i remember the first time we touched in his arms i was safely clutched each moment i spend awake i hold my head up and a smile i fake i can't quit thinking of him to have him back i'd give a limb i've lost my soul, my sanity i've lost my love, my humanity i could say i've lost it all but i still have these weights to haul.[/align]
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted January 21, 2011 Author Posted January 21, 2011 feedback? good or bad i don't care, i jus like muh feedbacks....
Lostsoul. Posted January 21, 2011 Posted January 21, 2011 Omg its amazing one of my favorites each line brought back harsh memeries I love it.
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted January 21, 2011 Author Posted January 21, 2011 thank you :]... and yeahh eh its exactly whats goin on in sam's life right now. it blows hardcore but it makes for good writin's
Lostsoul. Posted January 21, 2011 Posted January 21, 2011 I know what ya mean..... i write I dont write poems all my stories are always really sad their known to make people cry but thats a different story. Anyways I'm getting over a very low blow a guy gave me 3 years ago so when i read poem like these i always end up cryong or extremly sad and i end ip loving the poem because its like a story of part of my life.
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted January 21, 2011 Author Posted January 21, 2011 well i'm really glad you like it :] it really makes me proud when people can read my work and let me know it was touching to them. that is exactly how i want my writing to be looked at :] the best writing touches a heart and i'm honored when i hear that a poem or something i wrote has done that :]
...Kira... Posted January 21, 2011 Posted January 21, 2011 another sammy awsome poem lol she DOES wright awsome poems x3
...Kira... Posted January 21, 2011 Posted January 21, 2011 thank you guys lots you are whalecumed lots you diserve this praise cuz ur poems are ORGASMIC o_o lol
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted January 21, 2011 Author Posted January 21, 2011 BAHAHAHA xD just so you know you just became the most awsome thing on earth to me xD that just made my day. i'm going to make it a point today to use such a phrase hahaha xD
...Kira... Posted January 21, 2011 Posted January 21, 2011 BAHAHAHA xD just so you know you just became the most awsome thing on earth to me xD that just made my day. i'm going to make it a point today to use such a phrase hahaha xD yay! xDD i like making people happy
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