Peace of heart (long Poem)

[punk301]

To have expeiranced pain,

to have the scars of battles,

to show no weakness,

to hold true to all that matters,

 

to fight for Honor,

to seek justice,

seems to be a loss cause,

to seek with out pause,

 

but I look and fight,

I look destiny in the eye,

with all that defies,

i no longer fight for myself,

 

but for the rights of others,

 

To have been alone,

these scars line my heart,

my body,

my soul,

 

but to see what truly matters,

was worth it all,

in the end only the dead see all,

but the living expeirance,

that which is whole,

 

my mind spins to see the hypocrisy,

my body weakens under the reality,

but my spirit stands strong,

in the face of the wronged,

 

and when i look back to see,

my body falling beyond its destiny,

I see more than pain

more than sorrow,

i see that which is full of hope,

 

i see the green hills,

of my home,

i see the trees dancing among the wind,

i see the ones i love happy and content,

full of cheer and consent,

 

so come what will,

come sons of Cain,

come Lucifers pains,

I implore you to try,

 

I dare you to cry,

for now I realize,

for now I am ready,

to face my Destiny.

[punk301]

feedback plse

[GothicFreakazoid]

that explains everything i have been feeling. u need to get this published or i just might steal it!

[zredtide]

its Very meaningful! =D

[Lostsoul.]

amazing it realy good shane

[WickedLittleAngel]

thats really cool

[awesome.amber]

that is a good poem.. hun.. i love the strong meaning i got frm it...

[Guest Crimson Spade]

WOW your best

[punk301]

hmm i thought u got banned for watever reason

[Guest Crimson Spade]

One week ban from Scibe

[punk301]

really lol

[Guest prettypixxie]

My love you have done it again! you are amazing, this is a VERY good poem! It is absolutly amazing! Wow i said amazing twice....Well it is that good! I love it!

[punk301]

thank u my love

[xSAMMYxSUICIDEx]

its amazing, as usual.

you are such a talented writer, it blows my mind.

anything i read that you have written is always beautiful.

[punk301]

ur praise warms m heart