xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted January 27, 2011 Posted January 27, 2011 [align=center]when someone says they care you assume they'll always be there there to wipe your tears be there to crush your fears they'll stay through thick and thin stay whether you frown or grin you assume they love you you assume it's the final debut but really when someone says they 'care' it means 'i'll break your heart, i swear.' it means hold on while i crush your dreams hang in there while i ignore your screams. it's just another phrase slathered in sweet glaze it's meant to make you melt it's supposed to sound so heart felt everyone says it to each other they're friends, they're father and mother. the phrase i love you, so over-used it's just another slew of words to be abused i don't believe anything i hear because 'love' is only meant to sear burn your wretched psych and soul bury you into an unending hole. i don't tell people i love them if i only mean to comdemn so don't tell me you 'care' if you only mean to painfully snare.[/align] it's a shitty poem, but i had to vent. thus muh venting is done and here is a crappily written piece of poetry.
Guest rawr.ima.dinosaur Posted January 27, 2011 Posted January 27, 2011 it wasnt shitty all your poems are ahmayzing<3
GothicFreakazoid Posted January 27, 2011 Posted January 27, 2011 NOT CRAPPY! that is a poem that speaks the truth, my friend!
Guest -Mystery- Posted January 27, 2011 Posted January 27, 2011 Yea, I also wonder the same. Loved it really it's a great poem.
...Kira... Posted January 28, 2011 Posted January 28, 2011 yet another of sammys fine poetry KEEP ON WRITING SAM!
WickedLittleAngel Posted January 30, 2011 Posted January 30, 2011 i'm with everyone else its not crappy at all that is one of the best poems ive read in a while kuz it says nothing but the truth (:
Guest Crimson Spade Posted January 31, 2011 Posted January 31, 2011 If you think this is shitty i would like to see what you think is your best it was awsome.
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