5 sences

[Guest Crimson Spade]

I look into the dark and see a flicker of lite but then it fades

I hear the screams but no one comes

I feel the ripping tering of cold dull blades

I smell the cool sweet scent of blood flowing and rolling down my arm

I taste the crimson flow as the blood flows from my bitten lip

I see the lite stronger now as the darkness fades

I hear the soft sobs so low no one else hears

I feel the soft sting of freezeing water on open wounds

I smell the cold dark storm as it unleashes its power

I taste the electricety in the air

I see the flash run across my eyes

I hear the thunder clap

I feel the slit sonic boom

I smell the cool fresh scent of lightning

I taste the rain flowing down my face

As i sit eyes closed clearing my mind of the dark pain and sorrow

So long bottled up

[GothicFreakazoid]

exactly how it feels man. pain so deep noone can hear you or understand.

[Guest Crimson Spade]

yep