xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted February 12, 2011 Posted February 12, 2011 [align=center]i can't spell love with 'u' and 'i' if i said different that would be a lie L-O-V-E spell it out i start to cry now watch me as i slowly die. without you in my life tho my thoughts moved oh so slow loosing you was my toughest blow causing only woe now i hold you so near for you to leave is my fear i can't stand to loose my dear that pain would be too sincere i hope you never walk away i hope those lies you never again say i hope my heartbreak isn't waiting at bay and in this bliss we'll forever lay so hold me tight forget last night my arms are down, i'm not here to fight and if i say i love you, would that be alright?[/align]
Lostsoul. Posted February 12, 2011 Posted February 12, 2011 Welcome sammy... you wrote so beatifully(: if that's a word.
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted February 12, 2011 Author Posted February 12, 2011 awh :] well thank you again, haha idk if its a word or not but it made me smile haha this poem made me smile too tho... i'm jus in a smiley mood today hehe yay smiles :]
Lostsoul. Posted February 12, 2011 Posted February 12, 2011 Haha well then I just made a new word up! && Smiles!! (: (x
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted February 12, 2011 Author Posted February 12, 2011 i like thine's new word, i shalt utilize thee to thy fullest extent. :] bahahaha! xD
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted February 12, 2011 Author Posted February 12, 2011 anywayyysss feedback world of EP? :] feedback tis greatly appreciated <33
pinupdoll Posted February 12, 2011 Posted February 12, 2011 Dude, I almost freakin' cried!!! I love it!
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted February 12, 2011 Author Posted February 12, 2011 thanks you lots and lots and lots everyone :]]] this is one of the only poems i have written that i have actually liked haha i'm glad you guys like it too :]
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted February 15, 2011 Author Posted February 15, 2011 hehe thank you that just reminded me of frosted flakes... they're more than good... they're GREAT BAHAHA xD that was what i had for breakfast today :]
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted February 22, 2011 Author Posted February 22, 2011 hehe idk i just fart and poetry comes out of my behindd and thnnxx miss amberr :]
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