Watching Suicide

[xXForeverDarknessXx]

I watch as she takes the knife

While she drags it across her arms

When she slits her wrists

All the blood pores out and hits the ground

She is crying out in pain

Her mother comes through the door

Smiles and says keep going

The sound of her mothers voice

Make her cry louder

Her mother just stands there laughing

She is getting very weak

Then she falls to the ground

Crying louder and louder until screaming

Suddenly it's quiet

She is dead.

[Purple_haze]

Hun thats an amazing poem!

its very sad tho but thats what makes the poem GREAT!

[~bloody~suicide~]

i like it it's awesome : ) lolz

[17bites]

That... was better then Shakespeare.

[Cassie Marie]

wow that was really good.