Story not a poem

[punk301]

Shadow Thief

By Shane Pires

Prologue: An Offer prt 1

 

The boy sat in the cell within the dungeons Of Vera. It was damp, musty and smelled of rotting meat. The Boy?s unruly brown hair stuck to his face. His clothes, worn, torn, and bloodstained blended with cell walls. The only distinctive feature about the boy, was his Bright sky blue eyes filled with anger, and vengeance.

He sat in the corner, plotting and waiting. The guard walked by and grimaced, ? stupid boy, you think you can escape, well you won?t? he spat on the ground, and walked off. The boy?s eyes looked down, a tear formed, and trailed off his cheek. ?Unfair isn?t?? A voice said, the boy did not get startled, did not move. ?hehe not easily spooked.? A black Cloud poured out of the wall, forming a shape. The boy could not see the hidden figure, only its bright yellow eyes. ? Do you not want to escape, do you not want freedom, what about retribution?? the figure moved but did not reveal itself, his voice was deep and coarse. ?Quiet I like that, I?ve been watching you Alon.? The Boy moved upon hearing his name. Yes I know your name, I know your story? A paw appeared out of the shadows, ? Alon mirrion, son of Robin Mirrion, acclaimed Shadow Thief.? Out stepped the figure revealing red fur, and black paws, the boy stared into the eyes of a Fox.

[Guest InkSickVegan]

oOoOoOoOo good description and imagery! very interesting...i want to read more

[Guest Lia <3]

Love it =)

[punk301]

thx

[EmberHasIt]

Ahhhhhh

[Guest prettypixxie]

amazing

[zredtide]

Nice!!! =))

I'm writing stories too, and I love the the choice of words and imagery ^^

[punk301]

well im glad u all lik it, i guess ill have to start writing down the rest

[awesome.amber]

i like this alot.. and please do write the rest

[zredtide]

well im glad u all lik it' date=' i guess ill have to start writing down the rest

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Yes, please do :]