if i tell you

[~bloody~suicide~]

could i actually be in love with you?

even tho we've known eachother for awhile

i feel like there's nothing i could do

because everytime we talk you make me smile

 

that's something i havent seen in years

i want to tell you how much you mean to me

but that's at least one of my fears

you lift me up high and let me become free

 

if i tell you i love you will you say it too?

if i tell you your my heart will you promise not to break me?

if i ask you can you be with me will you?

can i ask you to be my eyes so i can see?

 

i dont know what to do

cuz everytime i try to tell you i go all wrong

but i want to tell you ive fallin for you

but it might take to long

 

you make all my troubles go away

you make me want to talk with you more

you make me want to love you even more everyday

you make me feel like ive never have before

 

if i tell you i love you will you say it too?

if i tell you your my heart will you promise not to break me?

if i ask you can you be with me will you?

can i ask you to be my eyes so i can see?

[~bloody~suicide~]

i hope you guys like it it's not the best but had to say it lolz : ) well peace..... : )

[ShaZam]

i lik it

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hehe thanks lolz : )

[monkeysam]

I really like it :-)

Tis a lil bit ...raw? But definately a very good poem :-)

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haha well thaks lolz : )

[xXForeverDarknessXx]

That sounds a lot like something i could have written.

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haha thanx must be good then lolz : )