xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted March 17, 2011 Posted March 17, 2011 it's all like looking into a broken mirror a picture of me, but scattered and shattered still the glass couldn't be clearer it's still a frame, just a little battered when you try to glue the pieces back it cuts you deep, you never bleed, just plead plead for help, for an end to this wrack but no one hears your silent stampede soon your left drowning in your own tears but no one cares to dismiss your fears. it's my nightmare, never ending a life not worth even my pocket lint no joy, no smiles, just pain so unmending happiness veers at the slightest glint i tried to sign my life away but even satan didn't want such a wretch i'm left as a shell no thoughts to array to build back my wall that's a tale to fetch i'm left by myself, cemeting this glass my mirror is shattered, such an impasse. so i'll keep bearing my torture and keep my curse sealed i'll live through this scorcher and my scars i will yield my name is forgotten, but my title remains the girl mending the mirror i'm forever bound in chains but with each day my freedom looms nearer with each day we each grow older and with each day my will grows colder.
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted March 17, 2011 Author Posted March 17, 2011 this one is kinda rough, i dont write often anymore so all of my poems have gotten a little rough but oh well... i always like feedback.. good or bad it doesnt matter. :]
awesome.amber Posted March 17, 2011 Posted March 17, 2011 wat u mean its kinda rough.. this is great.. love ur poem as always.. i wish i could write like you.
Guest Crimson Spade Posted March 17, 2011 Posted March 17, 2011 Your one of the best writers on here and this poem just proves it.
*beautifullybroken* Posted March 17, 2011 Posted March 17, 2011 tht poem was amazing. you got talent gurl
endofgreen15 Posted March 17, 2011 Posted March 17, 2011 Wow...that was amazing!! Your writing is so good, I wish I could write like you as well!!
Shadowstar Posted March 21, 2011 Posted March 21, 2011 Wow that is reallt good Wish i could be that good too...
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted March 21, 2011 Author Posted March 21, 2011 thank you :] and i'm sure you're just as good :]
-razorromance- Posted March 23, 2011 Posted March 23, 2011 Wow that was amazing! I enjoyed reading it. Do you have anymore?
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted March 27, 2011 Author Posted March 27, 2011 thank you very much :] and yes, if you look back in the poetry forum i have loads and loads and loads of poetry, haha :]
kingdomkid1 Posted June 21, 2011 Posted June 21, 2011 That was beautiful.... Ur a great writer i really want ur opinion on mine now haha, there r 3 on 1 topic but ill start postn em separately now... That was great though
xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted July 5, 2011 Author Posted July 5, 2011 thank you.. sorry it took me so long to reply.. havent been on in forever
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