Relapse

[Guest Crimson Spade]

This is the first time i've had an idea for a poem for some time so my writing is a little rough. Please comment

 

RELAPSE

I set sefting threw my thoughts

struggling to cling to my sanity

all my thoughts are of you

i can't handle knowing i can't be with you

i try and fail and try agian

to stop thinking of you but to no avail

but your beauty is blinding and hard to ignore

despret to cure this madness in my head

the stress the strugle continuse

i see the blade sitting there the only cure i see

tounting me and laughing

its been 6months since i used it last

i try and fail to ignore the urge

the blade cuts and blood flows

my mind is clear i can see again

but at what cost.

[punk301]

pretty good poem

[XxEmoWolfiexX]

I know how ya feel. Really good poem and some really deep feelings.

[17bites]

deep, man. really deep. thats how i feel.

[Guest Crimson Spade]

THX everyone im glade you liked it.