xSAMMYxSUICIDEx Posted March 20, 2011 Posted March 20, 2011 my mind has been like a blank slate ready to wander, but this i hate. i try to focus but i can't seem to stay my thoughts jumping around, running astray i've become like a zombie, brain-dead i think i can't stand to concentrate, just breathe... now blink. i feel so hollow, like an empty shell a bag of flesh with no thought, believe me it's hell. i want to feel normal but i only feel weak i hope this misery is only a streak a phase to pass, another memory to store but honestly i think it's hit my core. i've seen doctors who say they can help but still i only whimper and yelp. like a stray dog, i'm lost on my own walking left and right, like a mindless drone. i think i start feeling okay once again but then everything will only begin it's a nightmare, a cycle that i can't complete it's misery, and acutally even hell can't compete. feedback? thank you :]
Takahiro Shou Posted March 21, 2011 Posted March 21, 2011 Really good, it made me think of how I'm feeling right now, so thank you (:
Shadowstar Posted March 21, 2011 Posted March 21, 2011 my mind has been like a blank slate ready to wander, but this i hate. i try to focus but i can't seem to stay my thoughts jumping around, running astray i've become like a zombie, brain-dead i think i can't stand to concentrate, just breathe... now blink. i feel so hollow, like an empty shell a bag of flesh with no thought, believe me it's hell. i want to feel normal but i only feel weak i hope this misery is only a streak a phase to pass, another memory to store but honestly i think it's hit my core. i've seen doctors who say they can help but still i only whimper and yelp. like a stray dog, i'm lost on my own walking left and right, like a mindless drone. i think i start feeling okay once again but then everything will only begin it's a nightmare, a cycle that i can't complete it's misery, and acutally even hell can't compete. feedback? thank you :] Thats amazing You just put all my feelings into words, i haven't read your other poems, but i'll do it now, because if their as good as this their great! Keep writting great stuff - i'll keep my teary eyes open
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