Shadowstar Posted March 22, 2011 Posted March 22, 2011 This isn't a song; its the lyrics to my new song, but they rhyme enough to pass off as one.... please give me feedback, as im thinking about preforming this in a few weeks in frount quite a arge crowd..... im nervous... :un ]Verse 1 You seem down, is that a tear in you eye? It cuts me up inside, when I see you cry Am I imagining, or is that a storm cloud I see Right over you, but it just might be Can you see that ray of hope, shinning through Trying to, reach out to you You don’t believe me? Then hear me out I'll have to shout, this you must know now Chorus (Let me) tell you why your beautiful Let me tell you why your so amazing Let me tell you why no-one in the world Could ever be as great as you So just be yourself Don't let em tear you down Hold your head up high and just be you Let that inner light shine through Cause your beautiful Your beautiful Verse 2 Did someone tell you that your not good enough Don't make the cut, yet you tried so hard Are your friends out late at night, partying You start to feel like your not one of them Your feeling different, and that’s not a bad thing You’re a one and only, like a diamond ring And like that you shine, don't stop for no-one you'll be fine So wipe away those tears you cry, so I can... (Then i play the chorus again, then a guitar solo, then the final chorus.... its a working progress...)
17bites Posted March 26, 2011 Posted March 26, 2011 Thats awesome! dont be nervous, thats the best song ive ever heard! (well, read. O.o)
BisexualEmoEmilyxO Posted March 29, 2011 Posted March 29, 2011 Thats amazing, you shouldn't be nervous, that is inspiring!
punk301 Posted March 29, 2011 Posted March 29, 2011 its good, but keep in ming that beautifull is spelled with an a aswell
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